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Critique #2

Joshua Dragosavljevic has established a well-rounded and very good argument on the topic of Americans healthcare policy. I would like to start off by saying before I read this blog I have not had much education and knowledge on the American healthcare policy nor the American healthcare by itself and I found this blog post very educational and very informative.             The way the argument was established in the intro, to the transition of the body really pulls the reader in with a strong commanding statement, to informative facts. I would say that Joshua has developed a great argument on why “Americans healthcare policy is in shambles and why this needs to be fixed”.  Joshua states that the “United States ranks 27th in the world for healthcare and education” and that is the fac that I actually did not know and find very interesting considering I would expect us to be better but I’m actually not shocked that we aren’t.              Joshua‘s blog is very educational

Critique #1

Estefani Torres has a pretty good point in their blog https://govt2019.blogspot.com/2019/11/the-second-amendment-shouldnt-be.html “Th e second amendment shouldn’t be unlimited right to own guns”. This blog really spoke in terms of covering every inch of the amendment of the Constitution related to rights on bearing arms as well as the relevancy of what it holds to nowadays.             Torres constructed a well-organized essay on how gun control has literally gotten out of control even with in the past year. Pointing out that “guns are a well-regulated militia being necessary to the security of a free state the right of the people to keep and bear arms shall not be infringed”, and then comparing it to the “El Paso Walmart massacre as being an example of why these regulations need to be implemented on our gun control”. The point made that it’s not taking away guns that will solve the problem, it’s having more restricted regulations on who has access to firearms is where t