Critique #1


Estefani Torres has a pretty good point in their blog https://govt2019.blogspot.com/2019/11/the-second-amendment-shouldnt-be.html “The second amendment shouldn’t be unlimited right to own guns”. This blog really spoke in terms of covering every inch of the amendment of the Constitution related to rights on bearing arms as well as the relevancy of what it holds to nowadays.
            Torres constructed a well-organized essay on how gun control has literally gotten out of control even with in the past year. Pointing out that “guns are a well-regulated militia being necessary to the security of a free state the right of the people to keep and bear arms shall not be infringed”, and then comparing it to the “El Paso Walmart massacre as being an example of why these regulations need to be implemented on our gun control”. The point made that it’s not taking away guns that will solve the problem, it’s having more restricted regulations on who has access to firearms is where the target audience is being educated on why people are demanding such things.
            Torres has definitely made a strong point by successfully using factual evidence and comparisons between the constitution, to the process of obtaining fire arms, and then incorporating what happens when that process fails. The outcome of a failed regulated gun control has proven itself time after time that things need to change, and this blog has a big part to play in it. Great structure, great message and overall very educating. This blog is definitely worth the read.



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